Friday 16 October 2020

A Sister's Whim - Comeuppance (22/24)

 

A lot of you have been demanding that Mia gets what's coming to her in this series, so I'm excited to finally be revealing this. It was always the plan for the tables to turn - hopefully it's as satisfying to read as it was for me to write!

I have one final part planned which I'll aim to do fairly soon so that I can wrap this up - for now at least. I imagine it's a series I might revisit with some epilogues at some point down the line, as ideas come to me.

Part 22

36 comments:

  1. Holy cow! This is a helluva development! I definitely didn't see this coming back in part 1! I can't wait to see how it ends, this is amazing!

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  2. Yay! Thank you, she has received but a small bit of what she deserves. Stripped and modified. Serves her right.

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  3. Justice served wonderful work! You continue to amaze with this story

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  4. Can’t wait for the finale!!!

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  5. Wait, so she’s a he again, how’d that happen? Also, what caused the recent shift in mood for your more recent captions?

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    1. It's hopefully covered by the caption - s/he is just very confused at the moment, and being exposed by their Aunt/cousin has taken away some of "Olivia's" confidence. What they ultimately decide for their own future remains to be seen...

      As for the change in tone, it's just a natural consequence of reaching the finale of a series that's gone on for so long. The stakes needed to be raised, and so here we are!

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    2. Ok, thanks and I can’t wait for the next one!!!

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  6. Can you write one of my suggestions, please!!? RG

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  7. Can you please write a Jenna Chew caption? RG

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    1. Eh, not really taking requests right now... as you can surely see from my activity I'm pretty busy these days!

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  8. When can we expect the sequel?

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    1. Sometime next week maybe... have patience!

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    2. Ok, I can’t wait to see!!!

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    3. Ok, but a sequel is better than no sequel.

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  9. When are you going to post next?

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  10. Are we getting a sequel?

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  11. Please do post soon!

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  12. Looking forward to the series conclusion when you are able!

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  13. Can we get a new caption to start off the new year?

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  14. So is Olivia here to stay still since she liked it or will magic be explained to parents?

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  15. Emily I'm still checking once a week for the cap, we still love your caps!

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  16. When can we expect you to post again??? I know you’ll get the story figured out soon girl! RG

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    1. Emily, are you still there?

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    2. We haven’t given up on you so don’t give up on yourself, I know you’ll figure out an epic finale any day girl! RG

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  17. I enjoyed this series and can't wait for the conclusion. I hope that the sister who transformed her brother gets a similar experience. Perhaps she gets into a situation where she is falsely accused of rape or anything else effects men these days. But its your story and I'll be happy to read what you come up with.

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  18. Can’t wait to see the finale!

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  19. Still checking in! Hope all is well!

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  20. Can you please, please tell us something, I’m worried girl!

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  21. Congrats on 4,585,858 views! RG

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  22. I just reread the whole ASW series and absolutely LOVED IT!! I know you’re not very active on here right now but I know an idea for the next part will come to you.

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  23. Are you ok (irl)??

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  24. Whenever you see this Emily, can you comment here, let us know you’re ok and promise to post soon. I just want to make sure you’re ok

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