Thursday 11 November 2021

Sarah's Visit - Little Black Dress (6/6)


6 comments:

  1. A wonderful ending!

    Part of me hoped for the aftermath but my own philosophy is "always leave them wanting more" and you definitely achieved that here.

    Bravo! This was a delightful series and I quite enjoyed it being formatted in letters, it made it quite unique!

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    1. Honestly I did plan to include a bit of the aftermath, with Ruth opening the door and seeing a much older Sarah standing there and finally realising her mistake. Of course, the real Sarah would *insist* on keeping her new little sister around for at least the drive home...

      In the end, though, I just ran out of space and so left it to the reader's imagination!

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  2. Sarah does look amazing in that dress and heels. She has the coy, over the shoulder look down. I hope the girls are enjoying themselves and are not smitten by two well dressed Gentleman from a nearby college. Perhaps rugby players?
    Wonderful ending . . .

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  3. What a wonderful ending to fantastic series! RG

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  4. You did an excellent series on this!

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