I certainly loved this one. I'll admit, I'm partial to hypnosis stories in general but I enjoy this one particularly. The fluctuation of lucidity makes it feel dynamic and like the character might actually have a very small chance of breaking free.I also like the mysterious nature of the man that arrived. Leaves it very open to a number of possible paths this could take in a long form story.Thanks for posting this for everyone. We enjoy your writing and your ideas.
Such a great cap. Looking forward to the next one.